ext.
pinnacle house - sunset
The sun sets over the urban sprawl behind a sterile, modern
house that sits alone at the top of a twisty drive. Orange sunlight
gleams off of the freshly whitewashed exterior and twinkles on the clean
windows.
In the front yard, water in a shallow reflecting pool barely
moves as a breeze blows across the hilltop. Birds twitter and hop
amongst the saplings that divide the property from the street.
A MAN'S EAR-PIERCING SCREAM BREAKS THE
SILENCE. A MAN IN A WHITE COAT pushes a YOUNG COUPLE through the front
door.
man in white coat
It's best that you wait out here. We may have to sedate
him.
young woman
No! Please don't hurt him!
The Man in the White Coat rushes back into the house.
The Young Man reaches after her and
holds her back.
young man
We have to let them do it. It's the only
way, Mara. . . It's the only way.
More screams from inside the house.
screaming man (O.S.)
No! NO! I mustn't leave! It's not finished
yet! I'm too close! Too close to perfection! No!
The Young Woman crumples into the Young Man's arms. She
holds
her hands over her ears.
The screams from inside degrade into
indiscernible yells.
The sun dips behind the looming white
house on the hilltop.
EXT.
PINNACLE HOUSE - SUNSET
33 YEARS LATER
The shining white house looks untouched by time, as new as
the day it was built. The street around the house is now built-up. Large, Mediterranean-style mansions
dominate both sides of the property.
In the valley below, barely visible between the massive
houses, skyscrapers
break up the skyline and freeway lights twinkle in the distance.
Luxury cars are parked up and down the street.
Uniformed valets rush to park more, as a line of cars wind their way up the
twisted
drive.
The bass beat of music and the high pitched laughter of
party-goers makes its way
out the open windows.
People file down the slate path, past the reflecting pool and
in through the wide front door.
int.
pinnacle house -
continuous
As guests enter, they stop to admire the glass floor that
covers
another pool running under the center of the house.
They pluck champagne from waiters' trays as they pass by a
square
fireplace embedded in the wide stone wall that reaches up through the center of
the house.
Behind the stone wall, up the broad staircase, down the
darkened hallway and through
the master bedroom . . .
int. master
bathroom, pinnacle house -
continuous
MITCH stands in front of the bathroom mirror,
contemplating his reflection. He turns his face one direction
then the other. He pokes at the crow's feet around his eyes. He
lifts the
loose hairs dangling over his forehead and examines the silvery ones around his
hairline.
mitch
Forty two, huh? Not bad.
(beat)
Think I can get another forty two out of you?
Mitch looks down at several prescription bottles lined up in
front of the mirror. He picks
one up and shakes it.
MITCH
Right. Gotta stick to the terms of the contract.
You got it.
Mitch takes a large pill out of the bottle and
swallows it without any water, shuddering as it goes down his
throat.
ROSIE enters behind Mitch. Her figure appears in the
reflection of the bathroom mirror. Mitch turns to face her.
rosie
Are you hiding?
MITCH
Nope. Just putting my face on.
Mitch dons a broad smile full of perfect white teeth.
Rosie giggles. They embrace each other and kiss.
ROSIE
Come on. Your public is waiting.
MITCH
As always.
They leave together, arms intertwined.
INT. LIVING
ROOM, PINNACLE HOUSE - Continuous
As Rosie and Mitch make their way down the stairs, Mitch is
greeted by a sea of people below, calling his name and wishing him a happy
birthday. He thanks them with smiles, handshakes and cheek
kisses.
JASPER COLLINS, a pointy man with an enthusiastic smile on
his
face, pushes his way through the crowd toward Mitch. Rosie
notices Jasper's head bobbing across the crowd.
ROSIE
Incoming.
MITCH
Aw shit.
ROSIE
I'm outta here. Good luck.
MITCH
Thanks.
Rosie ducks under Mitch's arm and disappears into the
crowd. Jasper appears in front of Mitch and opens up his arms in
greeting. Mitch keeps his distance.
jasper
Mitchell.
MITCH
Hi Jasper.
JASPER
What's with the dark tone, man? I just came to wish you a happy birthday.
Jasper wraps one arm over Mitch's shoulder and leads
him away from the crowd.
MITCH
And?
JASPER
And what?
MITCH
And whenever I get a greeting like that it means you have
something to say. You usually make me sit through a few minutes of
bullshit before you get to it, so whether it's a negotiation, a speech, a pep
talk, or just more bullshit, I prefer if you got straight to the point.
I'm officially too old to shoot the breeze.
JASPER
So I have to change my style just because you're becoming a
crusty old man?
Mitch gestures for Jasper to get on with it.
JASPER
Alright, alright. I just wanted to give you a little
heads up. The studio execs are getting nervous. They expected to
see something by now. A summary, a treatment, something. I know
you've
been busy with the move and all, so I got them to hold off the dogs for a
while, but those needle dicks are starting to poke up my ass, and I'm
all out of lube.
MITCH
In case you hadn't noticed, they're not my studio
anymore. I am under no contract, and I make my own deadlines.
JASPER
I know. I know. But I'd like to think that after
sixteen years, you'll give them first rights. Is a little loyalty too
much to ask?
MITCH
Not at all. Like I already said, they'll get first
rights, when I'm ready.
JASPER
Alright Mitchy, alright.
(beat)
Any idea when that will be?
MITCH
It's my birthday, Jas. You think you can put the questions on hold for one night?
JASPER
I'm just wondering, and this is me talking now, if you've
chosen
the right path, you know? Is screenwriting really your thing?
MITCH
Why wouldn't it be?
JASPER
I don't know. You're just so used to being at the helm,
the fearless leader, the man whose got everybody by the balls. And now .
. .
MITCH
What?
JASPER
It's like you dropped your VIP pass and you're trying to sneak in through the back door.
MITCH
I didn't drop a fucking thing, Jasper, and that includes my
asshole agent. Of course, that can still change.
JASPER
Alright, Herr Director, I take it back. Don't give
yourself a fucking aneurysm.
A look of anger immediately jumps into Mitch's face.
Jasper blushes and starts to stammer.
JASPER
Oh Shit. I didn't mean. I'm sorry. It just
came out.
Mitch watches Jasper squirm for a moment and then a broad
smile forms on his face. Jasper breaths a sigh a relief.
MITCH
Don't worry. Once you read the first ten pages,
those little dollar signs will jump right back into your eyeballs.
JASPER
Oh, they never left. These are just contacts.
ext.
backyard, pinnacle house - continuous
Mitch and Jasper step through the glass doors by the busy bar, out into the backyard.
A narrow walkway divides the house from another
square pool and another stretch of fresh green lawn expands from the pool to
the edge of the property.
In the center of the pool, ARIANA, AGE 8, and JASON, AGE 10,
splash each other enthusiastically.
JASPER
Hey, another pool. I get it, three of a kind.
Neat house, man. A little unconventional if you ask me but then again,
so are you.
Jason squirms his way over the edge of the pool and sprints
around the narrow walkway, dangerously close to the edge of the pool.
jason
I told you I was faster!
Ariana scrambles out of the pool and chases
him.
ariana
You can't get out. You're breaking the rules. You
get back here Jason Allan Porter!
JASON
Make me.
Mitch immediately jumps in to intervene. He snatches
one child in each arm, halting them in their tracks.
MITCH
Whoa! Whoa! What did I tell you about running
around the pool?
ARIANA
That I might fall.
MITCH
Not just fall. Do you remember?
ARIANA
That I was gonna crack my head open, make a bloody mess in
the backyard, fall in the pool and sink to the bottom like a rock.
Jason looks wide-eyed in fear as Ariana recites.
MITCH
Right. Which is why the most important new house rule
is?
ARIANA
No running around the pool.
MITCH
Thank you. And that applies to you too, killer.
Got that?
Jason nods, his eyes still dazed from Ariana's vivid
description. Mitch releases the children and they step politely back into
the pool.
Mitch looks down and realizes there are wet spots on his
shirt from grabbing the kids.
MITCH
Shit.
He turns to head back into the house.
Copyright © 2010 by Margaret M. MacDonald